Nice!
I like it! The vocals are soothing. I feel some times as if the guitar is out of place. A bit harsch if you compare the calmness of the vocals. And try to mix the vocals more outside of the mix. Like useing a compressor and trying to EQ yourself in to hearing the Vocals more instead of increasing to vocals. And ur first take is nice. Just some places where it is outside the rythm. I know how hard vocals is to make. (I completly suck at singing) Though you are in tune most of the song.
And something I hate (which shouldn't be counted) is EZ drummer. It always sounds EZ drummer. Nothing else. Other then that nothing more I can criticize about. Nice arpeggios on the guitar.
Keep it up Cheers n beers.